Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Do not discard.

That snake skin in the gutter, strangely enough, remind me of something from me past, flowing in me present - stories from ancestors in me blood, and legends from me country that plenty folks here almost forget, that young chil’dren don’t know now.

As soon as my mother (mischievously) say that them snakes in the yard like me, the story of the strangest marriage wriggle out from me memory.

It is the story of the Amerindian girl who did marry a camoudie, a snake that does wrap around man or animal; it can squeeze the life outta you and swallow you wholesale.

The girl, a’ Arawak girl, was beautiful; plenty, plenty men did want to marry she but she refuse. Even pigeon who offer to marry she, she refuse. Then one day, a handsome young man come to ask for she, he arrive with four horses, golden harness and bridle. Right away, the girl say Yes.

Wedding day, everything was glitter and gold, and the handsome groom bring a dress of golden threads for he bride. After the wedding, they set off for the groom home. On the way, he embrace he wife and...

...the wagon turn into a pond and the horses dissolve into water which fill the pond...and the groom become a camoudie.

The girl swim and swim ‘round and ‘round the pond to get away but the camoudie grabble she and wrap around she. She holler and scream for help but nobody ain’t come to rescue she. Finally, all them young men who she did refuse to marry come and surround the pond. They feel sorry for she but couldn’t help, the camoudie been wrap ‘round she so tight. And they tell she how she is getting she right punishment for refusing them in the first place, for choosing that strange, handsome man who gon soon swallow she.

Then there is the story that Pa, me grandpa tell my mother.

One shivery, cold day, a man been walking on the road and he see a snake. The poor snake look dead, coil up so tight and not moving. The man feel sorry for the snake. He pick it up and put it in he coat pocket.

Slow, slow, the snake warm up, wriggle, wriggle, get back he energy...

...and bite the man, kill he dead.

Be careful, Pa used to say, be careful who you trust and take in close to you.

That discarded snake skin in the drain remind me of something else too, that I observe here. Instead of adding we stories to the grand history of man, to help illustrate the story of man, we the people is shedding we tales, leaving them to decay while we take in only them foreign ones now. While I...

...I dream of we stories flowing in we veins, grandparents passing them on, teachers teaching them along with foreign tales. And poets, writers would smartly, proudly refer to them along with Apollo, Cassandra, Persephone and others.

30 comments:

john.g. said...

You are a real gem! xx

Olivia said...

Oh, you're right, we are losing our stories. Grandparents don't tell stories to their grandkids because they don't listen, there is so much noise in the world now. Gone are the days when children would sit cross-legged in rapt attention at story time...

As for the handsome snake man with the horses and golden bridle ... isn't that an awful lot of effort for a meal? Hehe, call me a cynic :)

Guyana-Gyal said...

No Olivia, you're not cynical enough...you won't buh-lieeeeve how far a snake would go to get what he wants. You know, I think Clarissa M. Pinkola, author of Women who run with the wolves, would have fun with this story. I don't know how some grandparents do it, but they seem to get the children's attention.

Thank you xx John g. I hope I'm not false-sparkle like that groom.

Silver Dragon said...

Like olivia said, "Gone are the days when children would sit cross-legged in rapt attention at story time..."

... instead they listen to Rap and Dancehall, with vulgar lyrics and misogynist rhymes

with sex and violence permeating every line.

Gone are the days ...

LDahl said...

No, no offense intended, but I don't think...gone are the days.
Gone are the grandparents. Kids are human beings too. You listen to them, their stories, then they are more than willing to listen to yours. I see too many kids, little and large, hungry for the attention of their elders. The ones that act indifferent and angry are perhaps the most hungry of all. Be patient, show them you put them first, that you really can be trusted to care about them, listen, you might be surprised what you learn.

GG, love your snake stories, they bring back slithery-shivery memories to me. I remember a version of the snake in the pocket story, the moral being: A snake is just a snake, doing what snakes do. You decide if you want to get bitten or not.

shrimpy said...

Mostly, I'm glad life is not binary. Families move away, grandparents and grandaunts don't get to share their stories, which then die with them. But neither should traditions be held to so tightly and enforced on kids who grow up not identifying with either their adopted homes, or their homeland which moves on without them.

Hayden said...

oh my. Need to think. Tale well told, snakes evoke thoughts/fears/ideas.

So much in your imagery.

must think.

cadiz12 said...

some of the best memories i have of my grandmother are the stories she used to tell me. i do hope today's kids aren't missing out on that.

Guyana-Gyal said...

Cadiz, good news, good news, I don't think your mother-land is losing her stories, music, etc, based on the art and music and books that I hear and see, they're there, alive and well, it seems.

Hayden, I'd love to hear what you come up with, I know it will be rich.

Shrimpy, I agree about forced traditions and children growing up in different cultures, they're adapting but the parents aren't. What I'm talking about though is the way we here, in my own homeland, don't make full use of our stories, yet we make a mad rush for the stories of others, which is great, we should be greedy for ALL. But I look at how bigger countries, and even smaller ones in other Caribbean territories, delve into their histories, make them come alive, tell them in cartoons on tv even, reenact scenes in plays, dances, etc. Look at the Aussie Olympics opening ceremony for example, it was so rich with Aussie history, culture, etc. And I wonder, why aren't we here doing that too? [Some folks are trying, but it's not enough.]

LDahl, mm, yes, that's true, a snake is just a snake, and so are some people, haha...maybe that's the moral of the story. But that's heartening when you say all is not lost. You give hope. You've answered my question when I said, 'I don't know how some grandparents do it, but they seem to get the children's attention.' If I were to write about the benefits of young folks interacting with the elderly, it would end up being a book.

Sliver Dragon, I keep hearing that ol' song, don't blame it on the children. Okay, I think LDahl said it all, it's funny how some grands manage to get the children to listen, I think it's the way they talk to them.

zooms said...

Ah Yes,our mentor, Dr Estes, would indeed love this. Your dream is coming GG, as long as Grenada has Ricardo Keens Douglas, President Obama has Derek Walcott and Guyana has YOU. X

zooms said...

sorry, Richardo.x

Grumpy Keith said...

Love the snake stories. My granma used to make up silly rhymes to tell me:

When I die
Please do not cry,
For I will leaves you riches;
A knife, a fork,
A cabbage stalk,
And a pair of mouldy breeches.

She was nice, but as daft as a brush!

Mr Farty said...

The old stories are still around, they've just been Disneyfied - Brigadoon, Greyfriar's Bobby, it's only a matter of time before they get their hands on the poor Loch Ness Monster, sigh.

Jacob said...

nice post

Guyana-Gyal said...

Thank you Jacob, welcome to Guyana, park that bike and stroll around here for a while.

Mr. Farty, I wonder if they'll make him cute...you know, the misunderstood monster who's really all heart, and who saves a damsel in distress, and she decides to become his Loch Ness mistress, agh, slap me for giving them ideas.

Keith, I like your granny already. I wish I knew lots of daft grannies and grandpas, I like the funny, sharp talking ones too.

Ahhh Zooms, you're wayyyyy too kind, I'm not even one li'l finger as good as them, but that's okay, I'll just enjoy telling my stories no matter what.

Rev Island said...

GG, you are still doig magic... well done.

Caroline said...

I love the snake bride story - a real cautionary tale!

Have you found a way to program word veri? Its telling me to: readd

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

That's a good dream, GG. And I'm with LDahl on this. Maybe you should write that book! There's a big revival, here in the UK, of our oral storytelling tradition. We now have many festivals each year with stories and songs for adults and children. I'm really happy about this. Maybe it could happen in Guyana?

Anastácio Soberbo said...

Hello, I like the blog.
It is beautiful.
Sorry not write more, but my English is bad writing.
A hug from Portugal

Guyana-Gyal said...

Bom dia, Anastacio, e bem-vindo, e obrigada por as suas palavras boas. [Eu falo um poco de portugues].

[Good morning and welcome Anastacio, and thank you for your kind words].

Zin, you won't believe how you've lifted my spirits, I woke up feeling a bit bleah, now you've given me an idea. I think Trinidad has a few oral storytellers, mostly jokes they tell though. Today I'm going to check out [online] the revival in oral tradition taking place in England.

Caro, I spent ages and ages with my slow isp trying to read your blog yesterday! Ha, I wish I can control word veri, I'd have fun with it. Have you read that book, Women who run with the wolves? That snake story would fit right in, I wonder how the writer would analyse it.

RI, hellooo, I thought you'd stopped blogging, a few times I dropped by and you weren't there. Hope you're all fine.

Pollard said...

G. I love the stories that carry our life-truths from our ancestors to our elders to us and then to the world. Even as we write new stories, they only get added to all the stories that makes us we. This story brought me back home, not just in my mind but most importantly in my spirits response.
Thank you.

sablonneuse said...

What lovely stories - and with a message. Hope you have some more tales to tell.

david santos said...

Hello, Guyana-Gyal!
I love your Stories. Congratulations!!!!
Have a gret and pretty week!

Jacqueline Smith said...

Zooms is right, you're that good, you just haven't been acknowledged yet. Keep dem stories coming.

PI said...

Olivia: this grandparent never stops telling grandchidren - and anyone who'll listen - stories from; the past - often with a highly moralistic message. i jes' cain't help myself!

GG:you know what would be absolutely perfect? If you could tell - with your own mouth - one of your stories on Storyteller's blog. I did it with the help of grand kids so it should be possible and Sooo exciting. Have a think.
The boys standing round jeering was a reminder of how it could be in the north if you dared to look further afield.

Guyana-Gyal said...

Heh, Pat, I thought of you when Olivia said...about grands and children, I remember the visit the children made recently to your home.

Thanks for reminding me about telling stories on Storytellers blog. I must get the necessary tools, can you believe, I don't own a mic / earphones? I have only the basics eek shame.

Jacqueline, thank you for the encouragement, I never think I'm good enough.

Hello again David Santos, have a good week too.

Sab, I'm collecting stories, putting them together, as long as there are people willing to share, I'll have stories :-)

Hello Pollard, I love telling stories and responses like yours cheer me, thank you too.

Guyana-Gyal said...

Pat, those boys [in this snake story] standing around jeering seem cruel to me, like they're saying, 'Yahhh, you didn't chose me so die.'

Kold_Kadavr_flatliner said...

You'll love this. My father is a brother in Nigeria, not far from you. You'll love this, girly --- If the following is too irrelevant, that’s perfectly understandable; yet, Christ the King is perfectly relevant if thou knowest where thou goest --- To read the signs of the times (and between the lines), know Almighty God’s a concrete, kick-ass reality. I’m proof. GOD BLESSA YOUSE -Fr. Sarducci, SNL

hyndm said...

as long as you keep writing, the stories and our spirit stay alive...very important work you do

Anonymous said...

Gentle gentle gentleman
When you see my mudda gentleman
You can tell my mudda gentleman
that ah married a CA-MAC camoudie.
Stupid girl.
S.C

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